Yuuummmm. I love sushi, esp. in boats. I used to eat at a restaurant like this one here.
Oh and that's Doraemon on her shirt. XD I have a similar shirt.
The Kanji says "Sushi Boat" (or at least the website I looked at said so). The soda bottles have colored marbles inside, they are called Ramune sodas. When you drink them, the marbles move around but stay within their compartments so you don't choke on them! x_x
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1. Reinforced the lineart, thanks ~mmalaska
2. Added more shine to the hair, thanks ~EvaRayWonder
3. Added some detail to the wooden boats.
Great job. The only suggestion I would make, and I think it goes for most of your work, is to try to have some harder lines in your shading. It's all so smooth that I think you loose a lot of detail in certain parts of the image. I guess, if you look at the hair, I really like how you shaded that (where the edges are hard) maybe throw some more of that king of shading in to other parts of the picture. Looks great though... hard to critique because your style is so different from mine, and I don't want you to change the things that make it so unique.
Whoa that was quick! That food looks yummy, and good job on those hands again, I usually always look at thoughs first. The colouring is great too, everything looks so neat and clean.
I really like it! I love the perception. The pose is very believable.
I think that your shading could use some work. Like in her hair, some more individual hairline textures (I don't know how else to say it).
But really awesome! I really like the food!!
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I think that your shading could use some work. Like in her hair, some more individual hairline textures (I don't know how else to say it).
But really awesome! I really like the food!!
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